New song - a bit of fun!!

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  1. Jud

    Judd Member

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    We had Daniel Stendel
    But Paul’s put pay to that
    He helped the club be successful
    We played attack, attack, attack

    Our team is full of young uns
    Experience they may lack
    We sell good players for profit
    But Barnsley’s more than that!

    Stendel we will miss you
    You shouldn’t be going back
    Instead of signing experience
    You end getting sacked

    Allez, Allez, Allez
     
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    Paul Conway a wan.... Ker he wears a
    Wan..... Kers hat
    And when he lost us stendel
    He acted like a Tw.... At
     
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    Neither are Shakespeare standard
     
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    You missed out the up after end but otherwise a very good effort
     
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    It's good but there needs to be an iambic trimeter in line 3 of both the first and third verses. And the last line needs to be "You end up getting sacked"

    Keats and Byron have nowt to draw otherwise.

    Honest.
     
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    We had Stendel
    Daniel Stendel
    Till he got sacked by the board
    You’ve got some f*cking font
    You money grabbing c*nts

    we had Daniel Stendel
     
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  7. Gimson&theBarnsleys

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    Daniel Stendel was a Red,was a Red. Daniel Stendel was a Red, he hates Conway.
     
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